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Historical Sites Tour

　　In the summer holiday, I will visit some places of interest in southern China. By visiting these places I can learn a lo In the summer holiday, I will visit some places of interest in southern China.

　　By visiting these places I can learn a lot about our brilliant national culture. I will visit the Suzhou Gardens, the West Lake, Lu Xun's former residence and so on. I think I can broaden my horizon of our country's culture during the holiday. It is very helpful and interesting.