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Aid Education in China

　　Nowadays, one phenomenon calls for people's attention that college students are encouraged to aid children in the poverty—stricken areas

　　In general, aid—education is beneficial in two aspects. For one thing, it can widen the horizon in underdeveloped regions. For example, volunteers can get opportunities to experience a totally different life. For another, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions and they are enjoying the appreciation and on—distance friendship from the children

　　As far as I am concerned, china's educational development can't be isolated from each individual and it calls for the joint efforts of the society, the government and all of citizen. In a word, we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.