2009考研渐渐临近,大家对于考研作文的复习千万不可放松,现在就可以开始着手对大作文和小作文的复习了。对此我们特别开展你写作文名师修改的活动了,下面是几篇作文的习作修改。
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
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I’m writing the letter to tell (you) that I brought your music CD with me which I borrowed from you last Sunday. I feel sorry about it.
(But)Please don’t worry. I have got a solution to the problem. I want to post it to you by air express, because I think it is the fastest and safest (way). Do you have any other perfect(better) suggestions? Please tell me as soon as possible.
I’m looking forward to your reply and wish you all the best.
Your sincerely,
Li Ming
Sara点评:文章结构比较完整,基本覆盖了题目中要求的得分点,但要注意连接词在文中的应用!
第二篇(cbn)
Liming Sara点评:forget to do sth 忘记要去做某事(还没有做) forget doing sth 忘记已经做过某事(已经做过)注意定语从句的应用
题目二:
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Design & Fashion. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, and stating your reason(s).
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.
第三篇(Just001)
Dear Mr. Wang,
I would like to express my appreciation for your excellent leadership and counsel during the duration of(my) stay at Company Name. I have learned a lot about(\) skills you have learned(改成from you). These skills will be of great value to me in my(future) career.
I have been fortunate (it’s lucky )to be employed by Name of Company, I have learned that putting the customer first is of vital importance in today's competitive environment. Please acknowledge this letter of resignation and I will do my utmost(best) to finish the outstanding projects and for(with) a smooth hand over.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
Sara点评:避免中式英语的应用,辞职信的语言使用要委婉,对辞职原因的描写不够恰当。
第四篇(wolkebang)Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from your company. Though I have(\) enjoyed(my) working with you and other colleagues in the company, (still)there are a few reasons that force me to give up my current work(job).
First, after two months(during the two months), I do feel that it is not easy for me to get used to the extra work and night shift. Second, the salary has proven(is prooved to be )much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. Last, what I have learned in the university cannot meet the requirement of being an editor.
I appreciate the plenty of help and encouragement from you constantly, and I feel terribly sorry for any inconvenience thus(I have) caused. I promise that I will stay through the next month to help you find a replacement for my position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Sara点评:文章结构完整,辞职原因明确且有说服力。注意被动语态的应用和时态的前后一致。
第五篇:题目三:You have been selected to sing in a talent show. What song would you choose? Why?
People often cho(o)se those songs which(that) they think they can best perform, not just the ones they like. I have never been in a talent show. But I have seen Super-Female-Voice(a talent show) which is very famous in
So I think I would choose the song-- “God is a girl.” It is not a religious song. Because(after) I have(\) researched(ing) the song on the BaiKe in BaiDu websites(like Wikipedia abroad), I find that it has a special background story. A girl in the band has(had) a serious disease and need(s) someone to contribute a kidney to prolong her life. A boy wants(ed) to donate his, but the doctors do(did) not agree because the doctors are(were) afraid of happening(of) rejection phenomenon. During this time the boy came along with the girl, and he wrote out this song which was found after he died as well as a testment. The doctor followed the testment , carried out his kidney and performed the operation. After the operation the girl dressed wedding dress at the boy’s grave ,then she faint and never opened her eyes. Later, I heard(that) this story is(was) not true as none of the group members is(was) dead. And the lyrics is(was) not easy to understand for me and I can’t(couldn’t) see too much that the story have connection with the lyrics.
In fact, when I listen to music I seldom treat the lyrics seriously, usually just the melody. Many pop songs are euphonious. This song is the same as a Chinese pop song, and many people in
Finally, I hope the song would be the one I write so that I could tell my own story.
Sara点评:文章结构清晰,内容充实,要注意个别相近词的区别和应用!
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