1. Original: With reference to environment and pollution, the reason why I disagree to build a shopping center near the community is that it may bring much noise. Revised: With regard to the environment and pollution, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community is that it would be very noisy.

　　Disagree with something表示不同意某事，Disagree to do表示不同意做某事。这里用disagree with表示有人提议建一个购物中心，但我不同意这个建议。不是不同意去做。it may bring much noise是中式英语表达法，不地道。

　　2. Original: If there is a shopping mall, it must attract thousands of people to visit and, of course, a lot of noise and rubbish are produced. Revised: If a shopping mall were built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noise and trash as well.

　　首先在if从句中，动词要用虚拟语态，这一点我们在第一章中已经提到。

　　其次，为求简洁，多个客体都可以用一个动词表达，只要不会造成歧义。如此句中的people, noise和trash都可以用attract修饰。

　　3. Original: Second, because shopping center must be occupy many spaces. Revised: Secondly, shopping centers occupy much space.

　　副词Secondly放在局首，引导整个句子。

　　Space是不可数名词，用much，而不是many。

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