慎小嶷猜题猫头鹰答题：保护动植物‏

  雅思范文：保护动植物
慎小嶷猜题猫头鹰答题
IELTS Topic: 2011-12-10 
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谢振礼Jeenn Lee Hsieh 

 

名师预测2012年9月雅思大作文（20道）题目，最后一题是关于‘保护动植物‘。

 

审题练习：

 

慎小嶷老师猜测第20>Little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time.  Why have people done so little about it? How can we solve this problem?  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

 

中国考区雅思考古题>Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species.  Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem.  Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.  Discuss both views and give our opinion, including relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.  (2011-12-10 IELTS Writing Topic 参考当天原创范文)

 

题型--Problem and Solution （解释问题的因果，建议解决问题的方法）

 

审题那一刹那，如果顿时不知所措，建议用脑袋想五个W+一个H，灵感油然而生。但是不必面面俱到而什么都写，只要做到有问必答。试题中没有问的不必嗦，也没有时间嗦。脑袋里画出心图结构--起承转合。

 

回答这一题时只需论说你的意见，不是辩论利弊，也不谈赞成或不赞成，倒是有问说还来得及解决问题吗？你的立场（主题）：依法执行保护动物植物。

 

Problem: Who did what, when, where and why?

Solution: How to solve the problem?

 

生产内容--

 

What (is the problem)? -- Plant and animal species are dying out 野生动物与植物种类锐减，面临绝迹

Who (did it)?--Humans 人类行为

When?--Since the Industrial Revolution 自工业革命以来日益严重

Where?--On a global scale 在地球上多处

Why?--Excessive logging, hunting, fishing and pollution 非法砍伐树林，非法狩猎捕鱼，环境污染

 

How (to solve the problem)?--Severe sanctions + a recovery plan 全球严格执行保护动物植物的新生计划

 

>回答问题（Answering the following questions）。试题问得越多则也越能生产回答来作为内容:

 

--What is the problem?

--Who caused the problem, where and when?

--Is the problem very serious?

--Why people have done very little to protect wildlife (animal and plant species)?

--Is is too late to sove the problem?

--What effective measures can be taken to improve this situation?

 

谢振礼实验范文（重播）

Jeenn Lee Hsieh （修订）

 

 

起

1. In many countries practical solutions to protect wildlife do exist,  but a recovery plan cannot be useful without jointly enforcing legislation world-wide.

2. Trade in endangered plants and animals is now internationally prohibited, as is commercial exploitation, and so what? 

3. Penalties for violations used to be too minimal to stop such destructive human activities as illegal hunting and fishing, and deforestation as well as pollution, even though nobody should like to see the situation becoming bad to worse.

 

承

1. To begin with, the habitat of flora and fauna has been losing ground, although it is not known exactly how many species of animals and plants have been killed off or wiped out on earth since the Industrial Revolution. 

2. And it is feared that many more are disappearing at an alarming rate. 

3. Strangely, until recently few thought that human actions could affect the world's ecosystem on a global scale. 

4. In all appearances, it is as if anything that humans touch is going to be doomed. 

5. These days many are more sure that such actions are occurring, and that this problem is so big that no government can tackle alone. 

6. Accordingly, the biodiversity--living things and relationships among them, demand international actions. 

 

转

1. Gradually, the public is beginning to worry that the worse is yet to come. 

2. Some people worry that if little or nothing is done in time to prevent the disaster from happening , humankind as species might be doomed as well. 

3. Such is at least the view held by quite a few scientists and environmentalists who call for severe sanctions, or else. 

4. Others, however, believe that the case is not hopeless. 

5. The good news is that there is an increasing awareness of the great danger human beings are in, and an urgent global commitment has actually been reached to join forces to maintain ecosystem, although in certain crucial fields apparently not enough has been done. 

6. As it is, protecting the natural mechanisms and preventing pollution are hard tasks to deal with, nevertheless human beings ought to trust themselves in meeting the challenges, by reason or by force.

 

合

1. Excessive logging,  illegal hunting and fishing, and out-of-control pollution continue in many corners of the planet on penalties of heavy fines and criminal charges, but concerned governments across the world are no longer turning a blind eye. 

2. It is a truth increasingly acknowledged that, unless effective measures are taken altogether at once, mankind's road to doom is sure, although very slow. 

3. Fortunately, human beings now know that harming the earth is easy like pulling bricks from a giant wall, and that they may keep doing it until the wall suddenly collapses. (Created by 谢振礼Jeenn Lee Hsieh, ielts360toefl@hotmail.com )

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