书面表达
以" My Mother "为题,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:① 妈妈是护士,在县人民医院工作。 她工作努力,工作中严格要求自己,因此,她的同事们对他评价很高;
② 2003年参加抗击"非典"的战斗。为了保护我们免受"非典"的侵害,一个多月没回家。当时,我非常想念妈妈;
③ 我爱妈妈,并为妈妈而自豪。
要求:⒈ 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;
⒉ 要点必须叙述完整,并可适当发挥;
⒊ 不得少于8句话。
参考词汇:县 county; 抗击fight against;
战斗battle; 非典 SARS;
参考答案:
书面表达
My mother
My mother is a nurse. She works in the People's Hospital of our county. She works very hard. She is very strict with herself in the work. So her workmates speak highly of her.
In 2003 she took part in the battle to fight against "SARS". She was away from home for more than one month. So I missed her very much, but I knew she was trying her best to protect us from "SARS" and she was doing an important thing.
I love my mother very much, and I am very proud of having such a great mother. I should learn the spirit of working hard and being strict in the work from her. When I grow up, I would like to be a person like my mother.
评分标准:
1. 内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2. 内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3. 内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4. 只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分