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13000 谢振礼:雅思托福原创范文360篇

发布时间: 2013-11-19 10:21:06 作者: rapoo

  谢振礼原创范文360篇,基本上不分托福写作或雅思写作。 就以大作文而言,其实只有外行人才会动脑筋去刻意区分两种国际英语测试的差异。不论备考任何一项,应该全面到处参考优质范文,吸取有用的知识和经验来充电写作的实力。

  ielts360toefl@hotmail.com 发布英文范文的数量显然超过许多名师的努力。也许因为多数教师忙于培训学员, 所以无暇创作。中教如此,外教亦若是。

  建议学员注意多人多样的笔法和内容,集思广益。谢振礼一人一时之言,可以视为抛砖引玉。

  谢振礼应用【隐形模板】写范文。模板是死板的作文布局模式,不断习作久而久之则心眼领悟得到,肉眼却看不到模板。成功的托福作文或雅思作文必须先有成功的引言(Introduction)作为圆形心图的开头.

  随着引言中主题thesis的焦点focus而发展signposts A/B,到了中体(Body Paragraph A+Body Paragraph B)则针对焦点而提出论证,支持主题。

  结论(Conclusion)是引言的倒影,等于重复引言的要义,千万不要搞什么新点子,也不再论证。

  Introduction: Say what you are going to say.

  Body Paragraphs A/B: Say it.

  Conclusion: Say what you have said.

  所谓起中有合,合中有起,头尾显然必须前呼后应。

  开头三句话:申论主题,集中焦点,话分两头。结尾三句话:二合为一,还原焦点,重申主题。支持主题的中体要切题(relevant),也就是要针对焦点来造句:理由+例子+细节。中体的内容绝对不可以跑题到圆圈之外。在心图里,圆心就是主题的焦点。

  如果不先提出立场(position)答题也就没有文章的主题。如果不主动缩小主题的范围到可以论证的焦点(focus),很有可能冒了扩大话题的风险,因此造成内容迷路离谱,结果难免遭受考官扣分。总而言之,引言中已经从焦点里提出两个论证的指标(signpost A+signpost B)作为Topic Sentence A+Topic Sentence B),这就等于预表中体段落的去向。

  中体承段A与转段B的指标句最好是写抽象而值得议论的意见‘opinion’(而不要写无需论证的事实‘fact’)。应用这个雕虫小技则比较容易从个人的知识和经验中举出specific理由+例子+细节(reasons+examples+details)。

  行文回头到了结论,两头指标又二合为一,焦点还原,主题重申。全文绕个360度的圆圈逻辑:话题从何处开头也一定在原处结尾。

  引言是话题的入口;结论是话题的出口。入口(申论主题)和出口(重申主题),其实是同一道门。

  >谢振礼 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 雅思-托福范文 ielts360toefl@hotmail.com

  14525 Playing with children

  14824 Languages in use

  14823 Memory and success

  14522 Uneducated person as teacher

  14821 Environmental protection

  14820 Young criminals

  14819 The importance f education

  14518 Should mothers work?

  14817 Hard work and determination

  14516 Games are also important to adults

  14815 Comparing countries by economic success

  14514 Doing things for personal enjoyment

  14513 Solving world's important problems

  14512 Less important things in life

  14511 Grades encourage students to learn

  14810 Schools in 2050

  14509 Buying in small shops

  14808 Living standards in rural areas

  14507 History classes in university.

  14806 Government control on fresh water use.

  14505 Understanding concepts vs. learning facts.

  14804 Like father, like son; like mother, like daughter

  14803 Pros and cons of globalization.

  14502 Public funding for environmental protection.

  14801 Creating an ideal society.

  14000 Keeping A Clean Room.

  13599 Are young people less dependent on their parents?

  13898 Working time and economic success.

  13597 Determining children's futures.

  13896 Old people learn to use new technology.

  13595 Business persons desire for money.

  13894 Bad parenting.

  13593 Freedom or security?

  13592 Tough on crime.

  13891 The bad influence of the internet.

  13590 Keeping a pet dog.

  13589 The importance of family.

  13888 Re-introduction of criminals.

  13587 The qualities of a boss.

  13586 People are no longer friendly.

  13585 Be honest with friends.

  13584 A friend with a sense of humor.

  13883 Selfishness and greediness.

  13882 College degree.

  13881 University education.

  13880 Distant learning.

  13579 Hard work or good luck?

  13578 From childhood to adulthood.

  13877 Too many college graduates.

  13876 Family relations are not close.

  13875 Tourism and air travel.

  13574 Making quick decisions.

  13873 Children using the computer.

  13872 Mothers are better parents.

  13871 Nuclear power for peaceful use.

  13570 The influence of technology on culture.

  13869 Poorism or tourism?

  13868 What attracts people to fashion?

  13567 External appearances.

  13566 Are books more educational than movies?

  13565 Students' final grades.

  13864 Can natural resources sustain economic growth?

  13863 A human or a computer?

  13562 Following in parents' footprints.

  13561 Genetic engineering.

  13860 School subjects.

  13559 Not possible being completely honest with friends.

  13858 No free college.

  13857 Protecting wildlife.

  13856 People in developing countries are happier.

  13855 Studying a foreign language abroad.

  13854 Choosing a simple life.

  13553 Raising a child in the countryside.

  13552 How TV influences behaviors?

  13551 Same-sex schooling.

  13850 Never too old to learn

  13849 Why do people fail?

  13848 Changes in the 21st century.

  13547 A global culture?

  13846 Family planning.

  13845 Children's discipline: telling right from wrong.

  13844 Gender differences in employment.

  13543 Different clothes do little to influence behaviors.

  13542 Saving water resource.

  13841 Migration beyond borders.

  13540 Friends who are similar.

  13839 Desire for success.

  13838 Fighting Climate Change.

  13537 Why are some people attracted to dangerous sports?

  13836 Are famous people treated fairly by the media?

  13535 Neighbors: past and present.

  13534 Why do people work?

  13533 Enjoying your money now.

  13832 Defining 'happiness'.

  13831 Narrowing the rich-poor gap.

  13530 Borrowing money from a friend.

  13529 Never, never give up.

  13528 Why is music important?

  13827 International news as school subject.

  13526 Learning from movies about real life.

  13525 Clothes and character.

  13824 Parental influence.

  13523 Movie theater and home cinema.

  13822 Stimulating consumerism in economic recession.

  13821 Saving money for retirement.

  13520 Work-life challenges

  13519 Public money for the arts.

  13518 Games are important for adults.

  13517 Do people buy products because others have them?

  13816 Big cities have big problems.

  13815 Is it important to preserve old buildings?

  13814 Are animal tests for medical research necessary?

  13513 Taking risks or careful planning?

  13512 Good luck or hard work?

  13511 Traveling with friends.

  13810 Progress in the past 100 years.

  13509 Characteristics of a good co-worker.

  13508 How to be good parents?

  13807 Tobacco is legal.

  13506 Big city or countryside?

  13505 Success in sports.

  13804 Teaching capabilities.

  13503 Does success depend on luck?

  13802 Criminals are set free.

  13501 Why do people remember gifts?

  

*2012 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 原创《谢振礼雅思范文(IELTS Essays)

  8441 大学功能 main functions of a university

  8436 高尚美德 virtues and morality

  8434 农民进城 farmers move to cities

  8433 儿童活动 organizing children's activities

  8432 野心成就 ambitions and personal achievements

  8429 越难越乐 doing a difficult task

  8431 个人独立 personal independence

  8388 不得已作 doing work that you do not enjoy doing

  8290 天生才能 talents: born or made?

  8293 资讯技术 communication technology

  8261 历史重要 the importance of history

  8280 数学哲学 mathematics vs. philosophy

  8249 凶杀新闻 news about violence

  8283 越吃越胖 fat people: you are what you eat

  8285 大众交通 public transport

  8284 经验为师 experience is the best teacher

  8394 交通肇事 traffic accidents

  8453 民间药方 alternative medicines

  8458 环保机构 organizations for protecting environment

  8461 科学影响 influence of science

  8421 钱与幸福 economic success and personal happiness

  8291 社区义工 youth community work

  8415 小学外语 learning foreign languages in primary schools

  8406 物竞天择 some animal species are dying out

  8449 摩天大楼 tall buildings are similar in global cities

  8399 大学免费 should university education be free?

  8416 停学一年 travelling or working one year before going to university

  8400 研究经费 funding for researches

  8408 民间研发 researches financed by private sectors

  8065 未来现在 the present vs. the future

  8131 先天后天 nature vs. nurture

  8134 广告好坏 advertising: positive vs. negative

  8059 广告危害 bad influence of advertising

  8301 产品广告 commercial advertisements

  8028 因特网赢 newspapers vs. the Internet

  8099 报纸末路 printed circulations are dying out

  8036 暴力电影 violent movies

  8076 听收音机 listening to radio

  8092 转播球赛 watching sports games on TV

  8135 电子游戏 electronic games

  8321 道路阻塞 road congestion

  8341 全天电视 24-hour TV

  8361 手机电脑 computers and mobile phones

  8119 论全球化 globalization

  8083 跨国公司 multinational companies

  8004 国际援助 international aids

  8101 富国多虑 people in rich countries are less happy

  8093 引进外资 foreign investments are welcome

  8044 移民问题 problems about migration

  8136 养子不教 bad parenting

  8007 父母职责 the responsibility of parents

  8003 良母养育 maternal parenting is more important

  8128 子女管教 children's discipline

  8105 赏罚儿童 raising children: punishing vs. rewarding

  8125 电脑儿童 children overusing computers

  8325 手机儿童 children overusing mobile phones

  8122 地球升温 global warming

  8064 环保恶化 environmental problems are getting worse

  8098 保动植物 protecting animal and plant species

  8061 动物产品 issues about animal products

  8095 南极之旅 travelling to South Pole

  8068 清除污染 cleaning up pollutions

  8100 食物运输 long-distance transportation of foods

  8191 农机肥料 farm machines and fertilizers

  8099 核能风险 risks of nuclear energy

  8039 核子能源 debate on nuclear energy

  8069 科技烦人 progress is not always good

  8073 崇拜明星 admiring movie or sports stars

  8126 教导是非 teaching children right from wrong

  8071 教导从严 teachers should be strict

  8070 教师培训 training teachers

  8063 课外活动 extracurricular activities

  8312 离家住校 living in dorms

  8118 毕业失业 many college graduates face unemployment

  8089 大学文凭 university degrees

  8109 学习外语 studying a foreign language

  8193 为何留学 why study abroad?

  8396 鼓励运动 encouraging sports activities

  8258 科学研究 scientific researches

  8035 科学教育 education of sciences

  8054 论博物馆 functions of museums

  8091 论图书馆 functions of libraries

  8389 访博物馆 visiting museums

  8137 贫富不均 economic disparity

  8026 钱财助人 the rich helping the poor

  8097 穷人小孩 children from poor families

  8067 犯罪心理 criminal minds

  8106 监狱教育 education in prisons

  8260 认识邻居 knowing your neighbors

  8062 工作生活 work-life balance

  8102 工作保障 job security

  8090 社交技巧 social skills

  8077 便利商店 convenience shops

  8072 论艺术家 the contributions of artists

  8103 论性教育 sex education in schools

  8316 社会地位 social status

  8320 变换工作 changing your job

  8380 青年失业 youth unemployment

  8133 长寿影响 effects of people living longer

  8066 五代同堂 families of five generations

  8403 高龄人口 the aged populations

  8093 家庭寻根 family roots

  8190 喜庆派对 parties and celebrating activities

  8121 家庭计划 family planning

  8075 遵守传统 respecting traditions

  8340 晚生孩子 having children at a later age

  8395 健康生活 healthy lifestyle

  8143 幸福定义 what is happiness?

  8038 成功欲望 desire for success

  8047 失败原因 the causes of failures

  8032 论好邻居 qualities of a good neighbor

  8094 广告利弊 advantages and advantages of advertising

  8124 死刑辩论 capital punishment

  8043 流行时尚 fashion

  8194 学无止境 never too old to learn

  8040 男女有别 men and women have different roles

  8297 接受变化 welcoming changes

  8296 工作满意 job satisfaction

  8290 天生人才 talents are born

  8251 新闻报道 news reports

  8422 种族融合 races and cultures

  8440 分工合作 teamwork

  8424 飞机旅游 air travels

  8443 成功野心 ambitions for success

  8425 认同广告 conformity with advertisements

  8445 防止犯罪 preventing crimes

  8446 早学电脑 learning computer technology at an early age

  8457 手机传讯 mobile phones are popular

  8459 远程办公 working from home

  8462 垃圾社会 a throw-away society

  8466 当地博馆 not visiting local museums

  8467 共进晚餐 family meals are few

  8468 男人家务 house chores are not suitable for men

  8470 科技生活 technology and lifestyles

  8474 儿童广告 advertising aims at children

  8476 亲戚疏远 relatives are not close enough now

  8480 都市问题 big cities; big problems

  8481 家族关系 family relationships

  8482 学童电脑 computers for children

  8483 看书乐趣 the pleasure of reading

  8484 学童用功 children studying hard

  *2012 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 原创《谢振礼托福范文(TOEFL Essays)

  5438 相近朋友 friends who are similar to you

  5442 通才专才 generalists vs. specialists

  5428 恶有恶报 bad people are punished

  5419 过分自由 too much freedom

  5417 分忧问题 a problem shared is a problem halved

  5387 白色谎言 telling a white lie

  5313 明星显贵 celebrities

  5273 古老发明 ancient inventions

  5282 天生领导 natural leadership

  5300 贵买国货 buying national products

  5247 论创造力 creativity

  5248 论不友善 people are not friendly

  5250 人狗为友 relationships between dogs and humans

  5450 虎父虎子 like tiger, like son

  5451 儿童肥胖 overweight children

  5452 与众不同 different people

  5463 童年时期 childhood

  5465 进步祸福 progress: good vs. bad

  5382 一年四季 enjoying change of seasons

  5401 员工效率 efficiency at workplace

  5398 祖孙之间 grandparents and grandchildren

  5263 家庭作业 homework

  5447 学习动机 children being motivated to study

  5448 大学教授 university teachers

  5410 生活品质 quality of life

  5409 关心政治 being interested in politics

  5413 应变能力 social skills

  5405 贫富之交 friendship between the rich and the poor

  5053 悲观乐观 optimists vs. pessimists

  5055 社会竞争 competition in society

  5023 朋友言信 being faithful to friends

  5130 当机立断 making quick decisions

  5024 人心不足 people are never satisfied

  5111 物以类聚 similar friends

  5033 团队合作 cooperation at work

  5151 朋友借钱 lending money to a friend

  5110 不看外表 external appearances

  5132 商业道德 business vs. morality

  5019 世代差异 generational differences

  5011 长大成人 adulthood vs. childhood

  5123 电视影响 influences of TV: positive vs. negative

  5196 电视广告 advertisements on TV

  5173 世界新闻 international news

  5020 严肃电影 serious movies

  5129 电影风行 movies are popular

  5390 汽车飞机 automobiles and airplanes

  5288 了解异国 understanding foreign countries

  5120 科技文化 technology vs. culture

  5391 幼儿教育 education for kids

  5393 错中学习 learning from mistakes

  5107 淡水资源 freshwater resources

  5067 野生动物 animals in wildlife

  5176 保护野生 protecting wildlife

  5017 国际环保 international environmental conservation

  5022 科技发展 development of science and technology

  5021 拯救地球 saving our planet

  5088 名人明星 famous people and movie stars

  5394 名人意见 opinions of celebrities

  5031 男女分校 separate schools

  5195 中学制服 school uniforms

  5108 乡村都市 cities vs. countryside

  5030 为何工作 why do people work?

  5342 工作遥远 working in a far-away place

  5150 长寿有道 who do people live longer now?

  5010 行路健康 walking: the best exercise

  5041 快餐慢餐 fast food vs. slow food

  5114 吸烟有害 smoking is bad

  5018 危险运动 dangerous sports

  5252 背井离乡 leaving your hometown

  5397 朋友竞争 competition between friends

  5168 成功定义 what is success?

  5034 音乐重要 the importance of music

  5056 成功之道 why do people succeed?

  5042 晚睡晚起 early to rise

  5029 省钱无用 saving money is useless

  5045 大学无用 university education is useless

  5439 家人相助 having help from your family

  5423 课外阅读 the importance of reading

  5426 当代难题 problems in modern time

  5454 工作为名 working for fame

  5455 工作为利 working for money

  5456 全民教育 education for all

  5460 电影电视 movies and television

  5464 耐心策略 the strategy of patience

  5469 何谓芳邻 qualities of a good neighbor

  5471 昔日教师 teachers: present vs. past

  5472 环保问题 environmental problems

  5122 地球升温 climate change

  5473 不同衣服 wearing different clothes

  5477 艺术科学 arts vs. science

  5475 大小公司 working for a small company

  5478 患难朋友 friends in need

  5479 论好上司 a boss

  5485 领导特质 qualities of a good leader


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