谢振礼原创范文360篇,基本上不分托福写作或雅思写作。 就以大作文而言,其实只有外行人才会动脑筋去刻意区分两种国际英语测试的差异。不论备考任何一项,应该全面到处参考优质范文,吸取有用的知识和经验来充电写作的实力。
ielts360toefl@hotmail.com 发布英文范文的数量显然超过许多名师的努力。也许因为多数教师忙于培训学员, 所以无暇创作。中教如此,外教亦若是。
建议学员注意多人多样的笔法和内容,集思广益。谢振礼一人一时之言,可以视为抛砖引玉。
谢振礼应用【隐形模板】写范文。模板是死板的作文布局模式,不断习作久而久之则心眼领悟得到,肉眼却看不到模板。成功的托福作文或雅思作文必须先有成功的引言(Introduction)作为圆形心图的开头.
随着引言中主题thesis的焦点focus而发展signposts A/B,到了中体(Body Paragraph A+Body Paragraph B)则针对焦点而提出论证,支持主题。
结论(Conclusion)是引言的倒影,等于重复引言的要义,千万不要搞什么新点子,也不再论证。
Introduction: Say what you are going to say.
Body Paragraphs A/B: Say it.
Conclusion: Say what you have said.
所谓起中有合,合中有起,头尾显然必须前呼后应。
开头三句话:申论主题,集中焦点,话分两头。结尾三句话:二合为一,还原焦点,重申主题。支持主题的中体要切题(relevant),也就是要针对焦点来造句:理由+例子+细节。中体的内容绝对不可以跑题到圆圈之外。在心图里,圆心就是主题的焦点。
如果不先提出立场(position)答题也就没有文章的主题。如果不主动缩小主题的范围到可以论证的焦点(focus),很有可能冒了扩大话题的风险,因此造成内容迷路离谱,结果难免遭受考官扣分。总而言之,引言中已经从焦点里提出两个论证的指标(signpost A+signpost B)作为Topic Sentence A+Topic Sentence B),这就等于预表中体段落的去向。
中体承段A与转段B的指标句最好是写抽象而值得议论的意见‘opinion’(而不要写无需论证的事实‘fact’)。应用这个雕虫小技则比较容易从个人的知识和经验中举出specific理由+例子+细节(reasons+examples+details)。
行文回头到了结论,两头指标又二合为一,焦点还原,主题重申。全文绕个360度的圆圈逻辑:话题从何处开头也一定在原处结尾。
引言是话题的入口;结论是话题的出口。入口(申论主题)和出口(重申主题),其实是同一道门。
>谢振礼 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 雅思-托福范文 ielts360toefl@hotmail.com
14525 Playing with children
14824 Languages in use
14823 Memory and success
14522 Uneducated person as teacher
14821 Environmental protection
14820 Young criminals
14819 The importance f education
14518 Should mothers work?
14817 Hard work and determination
14516 Games are also important to adults
14815 Comparing countries by economic success
14514 Doing things for personal enjoyment
14513 Solving world's important problems
14512 Less important things in life
14511 Grades encourage students to learn
14810 Schools in 2050
14509 Buying in small shops
14808 Living standards in rural areas
14507 History classes in university.
14806 Government control on fresh water use.
14505 Understanding concepts vs. learning facts.
14804 Like father, like son; like mother, like daughter
14803 Pros and cons of globalization.
14502 Public funding for environmental protection.
14801 Creating an ideal society.
14000 Keeping A Clean Room.
13599 Are young people less dependent on their parents?
13898 Working time and economic success.
13597 Determining children's futures.
13896 Old people learn to use new technology.
13595 Business persons desire for money.
13894 Bad parenting.
13593 Freedom or security?
13592 Tough on crime.
13891 The bad influence of the internet.
13590 Keeping a pet dog.
13589 The importance of family.
13888 Re-introduction of criminals.
13587 The qualities of a boss.
13586 People are no longer friendly.
13585 Be honest with friends.
13584 A friend with a sense of humor.
13883 Selfishness and greediness.
13882 College degree.
13881 University education.
13880 Distant learning.
13579 Hard work or good luck?
13578 From childhood to adulthood.
13877 Too many college graduates.
13876 Family relations are not close.
13875 Tourism and air travel.
13574 Making quick decisions.
13873 Children using the computer.
13872 Mothers are better parents.
13871 Nuclear power for peaceful use.
13570 The influence of technology on culture.
13869 Poorism or tourism?
13868 What attracts people to fashion?
13567 External appearances.
13566 Are books more educational than movies?
13565 Students' final grades.
13864 Can natural resources sustain economic growth?
13863 A human or a computer?
13562 Following in parents' footprints.
13561 Genetic engineering.
13860 School subjects.
13559 Not possible being completely honest with friends.
13858 No free college.
13857 Protecting wildlife.
13856 People in developing countries are happier.
13855 Studying a foreign language abroad.
13854 Choosing a simple life.
13553 Raising a child in the countryside.
13552 How TV influences behaviors?
13551 Same-sex schooling.
13850 Never too old to learn
13849 Why do people fail?
13848 Changes in the 21st century.
13547 A global culture?
13846 Family planning.
13845 Children's discipline: telling right from wrong.
13844 Gender differences in employment.
13543 Different clothes do little to influence behaviors.
13542 Saving water resource.
13841 Migration beyond borders.
13540 Friends who are similar.
13839 Desire for success.
13838 Fighting Climate Change.
13537 Why are some people attracted to dangerous sports?
13836 Are famous people treated fairly by the media?
13535 Neighbors: past and present.
13534 Why do people work?
13533 Enjoying your money now.
13832 Defining 'happiness'.
13831 Narrowing the rich-poor gap.
13530 Borrowing money from a friend.
13529 Never, never give up.
13528 Why is music important?
13827 International news as school subject.
13526 Learning from movies about real life.
13525 Clothes and character.
13824 Parental influence.
13523 Movie theater and home cinema.
13822 Stimulating consumerism in economic recession.
13821 Saving money for retirement.
13520 Work-life challenges
13519 Public money for the arts.
13518 Games are important for adults.
13517 Do people buy products because others have them?
13816 Big cities have big problems.
13815 Is it important to preserve old buildings?
13814 Are animal tests for medical research necessary?
13513 Taking risks or careful planning?
13512 Good luck or hard work?
13511 Traveling with friends.
13810 Progress in the past 100 years.
13509 Characteristics of a good co-worker.
13508 How to be good parents?
13807 Tobacco is legal.
13506 Big city or countryside?
13505 Success in sports.
13804 Teaching capabilities.
13503 Does success depend on luck?
13802 Criminals are set free.
13501 Why do people remember gifts?
*2012 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 原创《谢振礼雅思范文(IELTS Essays)
8441 大学功能 main functions of a university
8436 高尚美德 virtues and morality
8434 农民进城 farmers move to cities
8433 儿童活动 organizing children's activities
8432 野心成就 ambitions and personal achievements
8429 越难越乐 doing a difficult task
8431 个人独立 personal independence
8388 不得已作 doing work that you do not enjoy doing
8290 天生才能 talents: born or made?
8293 资讯技术 communication technology
8261 历史重要 the importance of history
8280 数学哲学 mathematics vs. philosophy
8249 凶杀新闻 news about violence
8283 越吃越胖 fat people: you are what you eat
8285 大众交通 public transport
8284 经验为师 experience is the best teacher
8394 交通肇事 traffic accidents
8453 民间药方 alternative medicines
8458 环保机构 organizations for protecting environment
8461 科学影响 influence of science
8421 钱与幸福 economic success and personal happiness
8291 社区义工 youth community work
8415 小学外语 learning foreign languages in primary schools
8406 物竞天择 some animal species are dying out
8449 摩天大楼 tall buildings are similar in global cities
8399 大学免费 should university education be free?
8416 停学一年 travelling or working one year before going to university
8400 研究经费 funding for researches
8408 民间研发 researches financed by private sectors
8065 未来现在 the present vs. the future
8131 先天后天 nature vs. nurture
8134 广告好坏 advertising: positive vs. negative
8059 广告危害 bad influence of advertising
8301 产品广告 commercial advertisements
8028 因特网赢 newspapers vs. the Internet
8099 报纸末路 printed circulations are dying out
8036 暴力电影 violent movies
8076 听收音机 listening to radio
8092 转播球赛 watching sports games on TV
8135 电子游戏 electronic games
8321 道路阻塞 road congestion
8341 全天电视 24-hour TV
8361 手机电脑 computers and mobile phones
8119 论全球化 globalization
8083 跨国公司 multinational companies
8004 国际援助 international aids
8101 富国多虑 people in rich countries are less happy
8093 引进外资 foreign investments are welcome
8044 移民问题 problems about migration
8136 养子不教 bad parenting
8007 父母职责 the responsibility of parents
8003 良母养育 maternal parenting is more important
8128 子女管教 children's discipline
8105 赏罚儿童 raising children: punishing vs. rewarding
8125 电脑儿童 children overusing computers
8325 手机儿童 children overusing mobile phones
8122 地球升温 global warming
8064 环保恶化 environmental problems are getting worse
8098 保动植物 protecting animal and plant species
8061 动物产品 issues about animal products
8095 南极之旅 travelling to South Pole
8068 清除污染 cleaning up pollutions
8100 食物运输 long-distance transportation of foods
8191 农机肥料 farm machines and fertilizers
8099 核能风险 risks of nuclear energy
8039 核子能源 debate on nuclear energy
8069 科技烦人 progress is not always good
8073 崇拜明星 admiring movie or sports stars
8126 教导是非 teaching children right from wrong
8071 教导从严 teachers should be strict
8070 教师培训 training teachers
8063 课外活动 extracurricular activities
8312 离家住校 living in dorms
8118 毕业失业 many college graduates face unemployment
8089 大学文凭 university degrees
8109 学习外语 studying a foreign language
8193 为何留学 why study abroad?
8396 鼓励运动 encouraging sports activities
8258 科学研究 scientific researches
8035 科学教育 education of sciences
8054 论博物馆 functions of museums
8091 论图书馆 functions of libraries
8389 访博物馆 visiting museums
8137 贫富不均 economic disparity
8026 钱财助人 the rich helping the poor
8097 穷人小孩 children from poor families
8067 犯罪心理 criminal minds
8106 监狱教育 education in prisons
8260 认识邻居 knowing your neighbors
8062 工作生活 work-life balance
8102 工作保障 job security
8090 社交技巧 social skills
8077 便利商店 convenience shops
8072 论艺术家 the contributions of artists
8103 论性教育 sex education in schools
8316 社会地位 social status
8320 变换工作 changing your job
8380 青年失业 youth unemployment
8133 长寿影响 effects of people living longer
8066 五代同堂 families of five generations
8403 高龄人口 the aged populations
8093 家庭寻根 family roots
8190 喜庆派对 parties and celebrating activities
8121 家庭计划 family planning
8075 遵守传统 respecting traditions
8340 晚生孩子 having children at a later age
8395 健康生活 healthy lifestyle
8143 幸福定义 what is happiness?
8038 成功欲望 desire for success
8047 失败原因 the causes of failures
8032 论好邻居 qualities of a good neighbor
8094 广告利弊 advantages and advantages of advertising
8124 死刑辩论 capital punishment
8043 流行时尚 fashion
8194 学无止境 never too old to learn
8040 男女有别 men and women have different roles
8297 接受变化 welcoming changes
8296 工作满意 job satisfaction
8290 天生人才 talents are born
8251 新闻报道 news reports
8422 种族融合 races and cultures
8440 分工合作 teamwork
8424 飞机旅游 air travels
8443 成功野心 ambitions for success
8425 认同广告 conformity with advertisements
8445 防止犯罪 preventing crimes
8446 早学电脑 learning computer technology at an early age
8457 手机传讯 mobile phones are popular
8459 远程办公 working from home
8462 垃圾社会 a throw-away society
8466 当地博馆 not visiting local museums
8467 共进晚餐 family meals are few
8468 男人家务 house chores are not suitable for men
8470 科技生活 technology and lifestyles
8474 儿童广告 advertising aims at children
8476 亲戚疏远 relatives are not close enough now
8480 都市问题 big cities; big problems
8481 家族关系 family relationships
8482 学童电脑 computers for children
8483 看书乐趣 the pleasure of reading
8484 学童用功 children studying hard
*2012 Jeenn Lee Hsieh 原创《谢振礼托福范文(TOEFL Essays)
5438 相近朋友 friends who are similar to you
5442 通才专才 generalists vs. specialists
5428 恶有恶报 bad people are punished
5419 过分自由 too much freedom
5417 分忧问题 a problem shared is a problem halved
5387 白色谎言 telling a white lie
5313 明星显贵 celebrities
5273 古老发明 ancient inventions
5282 天生领导 natural leadership
5300 贵买国货 buying national products
5247 论创造力 creativity
5248 论不友善 people are not friendly
5250 人狗为友 relationships between dogs and humans
5450 虎父虎子 like tiger, like son
5451 儿童肥胖 overweight children
5452 与众不同 different people
5463 童年时期 childhood
5465 进步祸福 progress: good vs. bad
5382 一年四季 enjoying change of seasons
5401 员工效率 efficiency at workplace
5398 祖孙之间 grandparents and grandchildren
5263 家庭作业 homework
5447 学习动机 children being motivated to study
5448 大学教授 university teachers
5410 生活品质 quality of life
5409 关心政治 being interested in politics
5413 应变能力 social skills
5405 贫富之交 friendship between the rich and the poor
5053 悲观乐观 optimists vs. pessimists
5055 社会竞争 competition in society
5023 朋友言信 being faithful to friends
5130 当机立断 making quick decisions
5024 人心不足 people are never satisfied
5111 物以类聚 similar friends
5033 团队合作 cooperation at work
5151 朋友借钱 lending money to a friend
5110 不看外表 external appearances
5132 商业道德 business vs. morality
5019 世代差异 generational differences
5011 长大成人 adulthood vs. childhood
5123 电视影响 influences of TV: positive vs. negative
5196 电视广告 advertisements on TV
5173 世界新闻 international news
5020 严肃电影 serious movies
5129 电影风行 movies are popular
5390 汽车飞机 automobiles and airplanes
5288 了解异国 understanding foreign countries
5120 科技文化 technology vs. culture
5391 幼儿教育 education for kids
5393 错中学习 learning from mistakes
5107 淡水资源 freshwater resources
5067 野生动物 animals in wildlife
5176 保护野生 protecting wildlife
5017 国际环保 international environmental conservation
5022 科技发展 development of science and technology
5021 拯救地球 saving our planet
5088 名人明星 famous people and movie stars
5394 名人意见 opinions of celebrities
5031 男女分校 separate schools
5195 中学制服 school uniforms
5108 乡村都市 cities vs. countryside
5030 为何工作 why do people work?
5342 工作遥远 working in a far-away place
5150 长寿有道 who do people live longer now?
5010 行路健康 walking: the best exercise
5041 快餐慢餐 fast food vs. slow food
5114 吸烟有害 smoking is bad
5018 危险运动 dangerous sports
5252 背井离乡 leaving your hometown
5397 朋友竞争 competition between friends
5168 成功定义 what is success?
5034 音乐重要 the importance of music
5056 成功之道 why do people succeed?
5042 晚睡晚起 early to rise
5029 省钱无用 saving money is useless
5045 大学无用 university education is useless
5439 家人相助 having help from your family
5423 课外阅读 the importance of reading
5426 当代难题 problems in modern time
5454 工作为名 working for fame
5455 工作为利 working for money
5456 全民教育 education for all
5460 电影电视 movies and television
5464 耐心策略 the strategy of patience
5469 何谓芳邻 qualities of a good neighbor
5471 昔日教师 teachers: present vs. past
5472 环保问题 environmental problems
5122 地球升温 climate change
5473 不同衣服 wearing different clothes
5477 艺术科学 arts vs. science
5475 大小公司 working for a small company
5478 患难朋友 friends in need
5479 论好上司 a boss
5485 领导特质 qualities of a good leader