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• What is success?

  　　Today is sunday.It's sunny and warm.I go to nature park on sunday,and my sister.Nature park is good.The air is fresh.The mountains are green.There is a path in the nature park.I can run on the path.
  　　Garden is beautiful.There are many children in the nature park.There are fiowers.Red,biue,yellow,green......Colourful!There are many bees.there are much grass in the nature park.Ilike flowers.Garden is nice.
  　　There is a zoo in it.There are many animals.The animals are cute.The monkeys are clever.The dogs are strong.The kangaroos are dance.The ducks are sing.There are happy.I like animals,too.Because the animals are very funny.
  　　And there is a forest in the nature park.In forest.The sky is blue.The clouds are white.There is a big lake in the forest.I can swim in the lake.There is a bridge over the lake.There are mang trees in the forest.The are many birds on the trees.I climb mountains in forest.
  　　Aftoom.We go hiking.We climb mountain.There is a tall mountain.It's green.There are are many balloon.They are colourful.Great!There is a village.There are many hens and chicks.There eat foods.They are happy.I'm happy,too.In village.There are many margos,peaths,oranges,and garpes.Many many fruit.I'm full.There are goose,deers,cows and rabbits.I like rabbits.There are white.Cute and good.I like chick,too.They are yellow.There are nice.
  　　Farmers are happy.They and we is kind.Me and childrens play comes.We is happy,too.Field is clean.Chicks and rabbits dance.The vegetable is heathy and fresh.The milk is good.
  　　Them,we visit my grandparents.My grand parents is very kind.Grand parents's home is near the hill.There is a lake in front of the hill.We are happy.
  　　We go home.Evening comes.I eat dinner,them,I watch TV and play the computer games.Them,I go to bed.
  　　This is my happy day!l like this day!Because it's very good.I like sundays.I like weekend.