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The puppy diary (修改篇)作文

发布时间: 2016-11-28 10:45:21 作者: rapoo

The puppy diary     (修改篇)作文

On the sixth day I came to my new home ,I like my new home and I like this little girl ,too. We are became friends。

The girl has a big room,It’s very beautiful.

There is a big bed in the middle of the girl’s room . There is a black computer desk on the right side of the bed .There is a bookcase on the right side of the computer desk . There are some books in the bookcase. There is a desk on the left side of the computer desk . There is a green desk lamp on the desk. There is a Chinese zither near the desk .

When the girl reads the books ,I stay quietly .When the girl plays Chinese zither, I listen to her happily .
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小狗日记

2012年12月30日

今天是我到新家的第六天,我喜欢我的新家,喜欢这个小女孩,我们成了很好的朋友。

女孩有一个很大的房间,很漂亮。

房间中间有一个很大的床,床的右边是一个黑色电脑桌,电脑桌的右边有一个很大的书柜。小女孩的书桌在电脑桌的左边,书桌上面放着一盏绿色的台灯。在书桌的旁边放着古筝。

当女孩儿读书时,我会静静的呆着;当女孩儿弹琴时,我高兴地听着。

感谢爱在行动老师给我倾情修改,阿姨我会努力的。

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