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如何写好Are you feeling happy作文

发布时间: 2017-01-28 10:53:26 作者: rapoo

某英语杂志社将举办以“Are you feeling happy”为题的英语征文比赛,请根据自己的真实感受写一篇英语征文参加比赛。

要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺。

2.文字不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3.80词左右。

这是本次初三一摸考试的作文题目,很多学生看到题目后觉得无从下笔。他们大多数会写出答案I am feeling happy 或I am not feeling happy ,但如何论证却是一个难题了。在批阅试卷的过程中,我们发现很多学生都陷入了无法证明自己观点的怪圈,从而导致失分严重。

那么,如何写好这篇作文呢?我给大家支个最简单的招——按照电视里面的方法,把这个题目设计成采访形式——

A:Hello,B!May I ask you some question?

B:Sure, go ahead .

A: Are you feeling happy ?

B: Yes, I am.

A:Why are you feeling happy ?

B:Because I have a happy family.My parents love me so much .

A:Anything else?

B:I have many good friends at school and we help each other .We get along with each other . Friendship brings me happiness .

A:What about your school life ?

B:My school life is wonderful .My teachers are very kind and they always help me with my study . With their help I have made much progress so I think I am happy .

A:Yes,I agree with you.Thank you so much .

B:Not at all .

当我们把题目设计成采访对话的形式后,我们的思路就开阔了,然后,我们把B的回答串联起来做一个整合,不就是一篇很好的作文吗?

Are you feeling happy ?

If you ask me “Are you feeling happy ?”, my answer is “Yes”! I am feeling happy because I have a happy family.My parents love me so much . They try their best to give me a comfortable life and make me live well .

I have many good friends at school and we help each other .We get along with each other . Friendship brings me happiness . My school life is wonderful .My teachers are very kind and friendly and they always help me with my study . With their help I have made much progress and I always get good marks in all subject .

so I think I am very happy .

当然如果你想表达自己不幸福,那么按照同样的套路设计也是可以的。不过老师提醒大家,英语作文和语文作文是一理的,我们写出来的文字传递给大家的应该是正能量,而不是负面抱怨,不是吗?

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