当一切归于寂静

世界突然变的清凉明朗

所以

别为我忧伤

我有我的美丽

它正要开始

九年级英语第三次月考作文展评(1)

学校安排的第三次月考的时间正好与我们的进度吻合，九年级英语上册全部讲完。考试范围就是第三单元和第四单元。

第三单元谈论的话题就是有关英语方面的问题，英语的重要性，英语的广泛性，美式英语与英式英语的区别，以及作为一名中学生，应该如何把英语学好等话题。第四单元是讲太空科学。谈论外星人以及外太空生活，学习表达可能和不可能的功能用语。培养学习积极探索、热爱科学的态度。

基于此，本次月考的英语作文定格在了第三单元上，关于英语学习方法的讨论。

几年的英语学习经历，你一定积累了许多学习英语的方法，趁此机会，给大家介绍一下你的学习方法吧。请以How to Improve my English为题写一篇80个单词左右的短文。（15分）

How to Improve my English

孙思恒

I have learned English for three years. I was weak in English at first. But now I have made great progress in English. Let me tell you something about the way to learn English well.

One of the secrets of becoming a good language learner is to do lots of listening practice. I often watch English moveies and listen to English songs. In order to remember new words, I copy them on pieces of paper, stick them on the wall, and read them aloud when I see them. In order to practice my writing, I keep an English diary every day.

Last but not least, I keep on trying and never give up. I hope you all can be good at English.

孙思恒的这篇文章采用了总分总的格式，一目了然，思路清晰。从第一段在三年的英语学习中，自己的英语开始也是很差，但采取了下列方法后，英语得到了很大提升，一下子就抓住了读者的心，拉近了与读者的距离。最后一段，即使给读者说的，又是给自己说的。不要说放弃，只要坚持。

整篇文章使用了大量的英语短语，学以致用。比如：be weak in, make great progress, the way to, in order to do sth, keep on doing, be good at等等，为文章增色不少。老师给分14分。

How to Improve my English

张欣欣

Oh, my English was poor in the past. So how to improve it was my biggest problem.

First, how to remember the new words? I always copy the on pieces of paper, stick them on the wall, and read them aloud when I see them. It’s the best way to remember new words. What’s more, I should do more reading. Try to guess the meanings of new words, and get the main idea of the article. And when I answer teacher’s question, I’ll take a deep breath and smile, I will say: “I can!” Last, after class, I always review the lessons.

And practice makes perfect. I do believe! I can learn English well.

张欣的作文很有特色，总分总，废话很少，直奔主题，就看段落的长短就知道重点内容就是第二段。张欣对学习方法的介绍很详细，很具体。比如，记单词方面，先提出问题，应该怎样记新单词呢？然后再介绍详细的方法。对于阅读，是要大量的阅读，并且要学会在阅读中猜单词，这些方法都是很实用的英语学习方法。

Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧，这句谚语用得好，为文章增色。老师判分14分。

How to Improve my English

崔晨珂

I have studied English since three years ago. On my way to learning English, I have some ways to show you.

First, we can copy the new words again and again in order to remember the words. Second, we should read as much as possible. Be sure to choose topics or books you are interested in. Third, we can talk with my friends and teachers as often as possible so that we will improve our speaking skills. Last, we should keep an English diary to improve our writing skills.

I hope I can help you. I hope my ways are useful for you.

崔晨珂的作文采用老师强调的方法，总分总，并且在列举英语学习方法时，采用First, Second…Last, 很清晰，总体印象就很好，再加上优美的书写，整洁的卷面，分数自然会高。14分，应该得到的。

有些句子写得很棒。老师平时要求学生写作文，要使用最简单的复合句，最复杂的简单句。崔晨珂做的就很好，比如：Be sure to choose topics or books you are interested in. 这是一个含有定语从句的复合句，使用的很正确，先行词在定语从句中做宾语，所以省略了关系词that.

总的来说，这次的英语作文并不难。是因为课本上有专门的一个话题讨论英语的学习方法，所以学生只要平时读了课文，课堂上参与了讨论，应该都有话可写。大部分学生都采用了总分总的三段式英语作文法。在具体介绍学习方法的第二段都能采用，First, Second…Last的格式，给读者清晰的思路，读来很方便。

一直在告诉学生，英语作文其实很简单。重要的是要用英语思维，要用简单的复合句，复杂的简单句。另外，现在都是网上阅卷，卷面的整洁，单词的书写对老师分数的判定都起着至关重要的作用，所以英语卷面如同语文一样，要整洁，漂亮！

希望孩子们的英语作文越来越出色，越来越喜欢英语作文！

窗外放晴了

屋内仍继续下雨

我微笑

并不等于我快乐

我撑伞

并非只是为了避雨

你永远都不懂我在想什么

结束