【英语小练笔2】

This is me

Hello, everyone. My name is Li linman, I am ten years old. I have long black hair and two small eyes.The teeth are very interesting, but they are special. They seem to be the rabbit teeth. (The tooth is very interesting. My teeyh are special, seem the rabbit tooth.)

I have lived in Wugang for ten years. I am in Class Three，Grade Five. I love reading、writing and dancing in my free time, sometimes I go shopping with my mother.

My favorite sport is running, I often stay with my classmates after class.

OK, this is me. Do you want to make friends with me?

【翻译】：自我介绍

大家好。我叫李林蔓,今年十岁了。我有一头长长的黑头发和两个小眼睛。我的牙齿非常有趣，而且很特别，他们好像是兔子牙。（我的牙齿更是有趣,好像兔子牙。）

我住在舞钢已经有十年了。我在五年级三班。我喜欢在空闲的时间读书、写字和跳舞，有时我还和妈妈一起购物。

我最喜欢的运动是跑步,我经常和同学一起跑步。

好了，这就是我。你想做我的朋友吗？

【自评】：谢谢“爱在行动”老师的鼓励，让我有勇气再次拿起笔来练习我的双语小短文。我决定从最基础的写起，写的不好，欢迎大家多多指导。O(∩_∩)O谢谢！

英语文章排版总是排不好，就这样吧。不好意思，让大家费神了。

【自评】：感谢“爱在行动”老师的专业指导，我把错误的地方已经纠正过来了。文中红字是订正的，括号里面的是我的原文。谢谢老师的指导，欢迎大家继续点评指导。谢谢你们！