The doctor and the patient's dialogue

One day,Jerry stays in bed.Because he feels ill,so he calls the doctor.

The doctor come,then Jerry asks doctor：“I feel ill,what's the matter with me?"

Doctor says：“Open your mouth,Jerry.Show me your tongue.say’Ah‘”Jerry Open his tongue.

“What's the matter with me?” Jerry akes.

“You have got the ful.so you must stay at home for two weeks.Take some medicine on the line"doctor says.

That's good news for Jerry.Because he doesn't like school.

So he stays at home two weeks.

译文：

医生与病人的对话

有一天，杰瑞呆在床上。因为他觉得不舒服，所以他给医生打电话。

医生来了，然后杰瑞问医生：“我感觉不舒服，我到底怎么了？”

医生说：“请张开你的嘴，杰瑞。让我看看你的舌头。说“啊”，杰瑞打开他的舌头。

“我有什么毛病？“杰瑞问。

“你有流行性感冒.所以你必须在家待两星期。吃点药就行了。”医生说。

这对杰瑞来说是个好消息，因为他不喜欢上学。

所以他在家里呆了两个星期。

<Meの话>：这次小练笔是补习班老师布置的作业，这次的练笔是一次对话。希望英语高手给我点评一下。