Hello, this is my little sister .

She's JiaJia . look!

你好，这是我的妹妹，她叫嘉嘉。看！

She’s years old one. She's thin and
short.

她今年1岁了，她非常的瘦并且很矮。

But she has got big
black eyes .

但她有一双黑色的大眼睛。

And
she's face is fat .

并且她的脸胖胖的。

She's lovely .
So I very like her.

她很可爱，所以我非常喜欢她。

Yesterday was her birthday.

昨天是我妹妹的生日。

Dad
bought a cake.

爸爸买了一个蛋糕。

It's (it has 的缩写） got two pandas and three flowers on it.

上面有两只熊猫和三朵花。

It's very beautiful and delicious .

它非常的漂亮而且很美味。

Mum lighted a
candle.

妈妈点燃了蜡烛。

Then she blowed out the candle .

然后她又将蜡烛吹灭 。

We start
ate cake.

我们开始吃蛋糕。

So yesterday my
little sister was very
happy.

所以昨天我的妹妹非常开心。

This is my
little sister.

这就是我的妹妹。

Do you
like her?

你喜欢她吗?

我的话：因为原来的那篇文章有些语句写的是错的，所以修改了一下，（字号大一点的是修改的）不知道修改正确没有，希望大家能多多指导。